FILM NOIR - Production Log

I am working with Harry Ellerd-Cheers. Last lesson, after completing our script, we read our scripts to the class as so we could recieve feedback on it. We did not need to make any drastic changes to our first draft according to the feedback from the class. Mr Sheppard suggested that the script may be too long, but as the script is only one and a half pages long, we are reluctant to reduce the script by much more. We may reduce some dialogue if we think it may go over the two minute limit, or try and keep the title sequence shorter, but as it is I think we're going to keep the script pretty much the same for the second draft, just with a few dialogue changes.